My Writing

This is my good piece of writing and I think is my best piece because i have done my best effort in my story. I have been working on my goal and my goal is to write sentence with different beginnings and I have not finished this goal. 

Mum says, “how are you going Georgia?” I said, “I am so, so happy”. “How are you mum?” Mum says “I am good”. I say “Mum, is the family coming over tomorrow?’’ Mum replied “yes they are Georgia”. I say “I hope the power does not go out when I open my presents”. Mum says “yes”. It was the next day and I was so happy BUT that night the power went out when I was opening my first present. So we went to my cousin’s house. So we went to my cousins house and I went on my cousin's iPod touch and I played a baking game. She did not mind. Then I carried on with it when we were at my cousin's house. My cousins are called Jack, Ella, Emma, Criser, and Aden. Then I had to go to bed and I asked mum “am I having a birthday party”? Mum says “yes, where do you want to go for it?” I say “I want to go to the skating rink”. Mum says “ok who do you want invite”? I say i do not know mum, who do you think? mum says” I do not know. it was the next day and I had to go to school and then I waited and waited until it was Thursday. “I said one more day until my birthday” mum says yes” but do you still want to go the skating rink? I say yes” mum why wouldn't I mum can Sarah stay the night please mum says” yes I say yay”. mum do we make the cake? ok but we have to do it fast mum says”. so we do the cake with icing that is pink, purple, blue, and green, and I said” to mum we have made a scene on the cake and we have a bunny and tic tacs in fact we have five tic tacs on the bunny.There is four tic tacs on the feet and one tic tac for the tooth. In the scene there is a sky and some green icing for the grass and for the sky it is the blue icing I said to mum”.