This is my writing and my goal is to write sentences that have different beginnings and I think I have gone good. But i do not think that I have finished my goal. I am writing this story for my mum and dad. Can you see if I have used different beginnings on my sentences?
What a great idea for a story Georgia. You wrote an excellent beginning. I kept wondering what was going to happen on 'a dark and stormy night' and I wanted to read more.
ReplyDeleteKeep working on your goal. A good idea is to highlight the starting words of each sentence and see if you have used different ones. From Mrs O